the kick needs to be louder! there's so much going on, which is awesome. you have my support.
This is cool, man. Kinda creepy and a bit sci-fi. I also like the sort of industrial sounds you put in there (those metallic clinks and shit), it really adds to it.
I like your style, you really know what your doing with your music!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.