Not too good, man :(
I understand you worked hard on this song, but unfortunately, nothing about this track grabs me at all. The composition is lifeless and not very well structured. The mixing could do with some work too, but I really think you should concentrate more on the actual compositions for the moment!
Keep at it, and you'll get there! :)
...DID I JUST GET OWNED?!?!
Overall a pretty good song