hi i love the black metal vocals you have going on and those pinch harmonics sound really good too
you also use my favourite chord in there as well in the intro so you get bonus points just for that haha
the instrument that comes in at 0:18 could use some effects on it i cant really tell if its a bass or a dry electric guitar, but either way it needs a bit of eq on it because it sounds a little rubbery and doesn't really sink well into the mix so i knocked half a star off for that but besides that the songs pretty flawless
I love it (:
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.