The whole song felt like background music. There was not one dominant melody the whole song. I liked the fade out ending, it was so soft and relaxing. Even if it was the result of laziness, I still like it. I think in the future you should work on having 2 or 3 dominant melodies through out the song.
thanks dude you're probably right about the melodies.
I love your style, Synthapse. The catchy and energetic bass strangely compliments the slow, mellow melody very well! It's dreamy and thought-provoking. However, I don't think the melody quite worked with the "back-up melody" at around 1:42-2:15. I also have to say: I'm not a fan of the fade-out endings. They just seem lazy and anticlimactic to me. Still, like I said, love your style and hope this review helped you! Keep up the good work! :)
Omg thx so much I will try my best to not be lazy!
some things to consider.
1. trance usually has a more dominant melody but the melody here almost doesnt exist at all.
2. with this kind of composition i would call it house especially with that strong bass line.
3. the quality is nice but i think you should spend more time on your eq.
4. all things being said this piece is actually really good there are just some technical flaws and i would change the genre.
your welcome :)
Thx for all the advice I will keep all of this in mind in my next composition!
Its a nice song but the melodies are rather uncreative
Thx for your response. Do you have any advice on how to make the melody better?
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