This has promise. I would recommend adding diversity in the drum works. It's a little too upbeat to be a droning mechanical piece, but too plain to be much else. Perhaps adding a break beat, changing the tempo, changing patterns periodically - some sort of diversity that maintains the attention of the listener. Look forward to the next version.
Cheers on the review dude,
what i was planning on doing is adding a breakdown and a build-up to a dubstep drop.
thanks for the tips, i'll be sure to add them in.. somewhere