I like the song. Good build up. Arrangement is decent. I really like your use on harps and timpani. Perhaps, some timpani rolls and bass drum hit near the end can make it more epic. Ending is quite out of place, you let it dies out too sudden.
Overall, this piece is really enjoyable. Good work.
Thanks. Never realized the ending would be too sudden. I'm not too good at writing endings, so this is one of my better ones.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.