Interesting instruments, and I like the style. Drums were interesting, too, especially how you used them as a transition. I don't feel like this song is complete, however. Maybe you could add more of a climax to the piece. It seemed like that's what you were doing until :48, then it fades off. I do like the synth at :50, though. However, I don't understand what you were doing at the end...it didn't loop well, but it also just ended. I was almost...confused. I'm sure you don't feel like this is complete either, but I feel like completed pieces express emotions better than short, bizarrely-ended pieces. Please try to understand. It's a great start, and I like the dreamy and ambient theme. Keep working on it; I think it would be worth it. ;)
I definately appreciate where your coming from. It's not finished and won't ever be sadly. This is one of about 300 tracks I had made that have been lost over time. Just finding CD's with these on them recently and uploading them so I can always have a listen. Thank you for the review though. I agree with all your points. Maybe I will re-make this one day.
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