This was great, but you put it in the wrong genre!
Since a lot of this track is 8-bit style, it`s clear that it`s a Video Game track!
But anyways, this was really great, I really LOVE Video Game style tracks like this, you did a great job on this.
If improvements are needed, I`d say you`ll need to get something done in that pause, because it really doesn`t fit.
I liked it alot, fun to listen to.
thanks, yeah its kind of in your face ish but its still alright