A strong effort
Sure, it's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, but it's solid for what you were going for. I figure some folks will get their boxers in a bunch over it being described as "goth" but that's such a vague term any more, like saying "alternative." Personally, I think the description is just fine. My big complaint is that the bass is a little too strong. It may have actually been more captivating if it hadn't been distorted. It would have been very Depeche Mode or Cure-esque. I'm still really fond of the droning background noise and the clicky bits. Makes a really good loop too :D. Hope to see more good work from you!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.