You've got a lot of interesting rhythms, melodies, and instruments packed into this one. There's not much I don't like in this one, really. I still think it could be made better.
You never really repeat the same melody twice, which is good for variety. Try to think of it like storytelling, though; you don't need to repeat a melody as much as resolve it. The end always comes back to the beginning in the end. Echoes of previous melodies layered on could spice up the rest...
dam nice. well I did not work on this song for very long because it was just for fun I just made it in one night that explains the work effort..
mmm I like that the fact that you noticed the song structure of the structure patterns yea I gess I could had ended it with the before melody at the end as well but I was rushing oh well next time I will know
Not too shabby! The synth line that started around 2:22 was a bit harsh, but then it faded off abruptly and the song continued nicely. Anyone feel like playing Mega Man now?
yea sorry about that harsh solo lead it was the only good one I made up at that time that fit well with it and I don't know mega man sry =(
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.