Great track. You both did a good job but I agree with the other comment about the mixing, it sounds like there's some echoing interfering with the sound which presented a serious issue with Fats' doubletime being coherent. You both came with some solid, heartfelt bars. Teqneek murdered it with multis in his second verse.
The one thing that nagged at me moreso than the mixing was that you both seemed a little aggressive even though you were delivering gentle bars on a gentle beat. Both of you sounded like you could have been scowling and flexing your biceps while you were recording, which was a little disappointing because you both had great bars.
The vocal manipulation on fat beats can be unsettling and muddies up words,
Fat Beats sounds very nice and full, very effective annunciation in terms of the mix, Teqneek almost sounds high passed lol. Both you could sound literally 100% better with proper vocal processing!
Never been a hip-hop guy, just some constructive thoughts
This song is fire. Fuck that 0 Bomb shit. Dope song. Great job.
Thanks man. Some of the people here are pathetic dickheads lol.
Verse 2 is dope. Loving the double time in verse 1 as well.
Beat is good, you guys fit well over the beat, and best of all, fit well together.
Good stuff guys.
AAAAAAAAH THE ZERO BRIGADE HAS ARRIVED!!!!!! Thanks for the review btw homie!
DEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP!!!! haha.. 5d and downloaded! Keep up both!
My next song gonna be shallow as fuck. Rapping about wasting food in order to increase world hunger. Oh shit you're gonna be on it too lol. Anyway thanks for the comment homie!
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