With that quiet intro and relatively soft build-up I certainly didn't expect this upbeat rock music to come after that. I think you did that well. Upbeat songs usually start pretty upbeat.
The main thing I dislike about this song is that it sounds kind of sinple. Although you did give it something different with the guitar at the end, the main tune is this four-second tune which, although it sounds good, gets a bit boring after a minute. For my personal taste in upbeat songs it isn't exiting enough.
You can still clearly hear it's not your first song. There are no mistakes or off-sounding things, and the song sounds full.
I enjoyed listening to this piece, and it's certainly not bad, but it's not enough to my taste to become one of my favorites.
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