AS it picks up at around :54 I find it a very happy and beautiful composition. I quite honestly yearn for this kind of grasp on melodic parts and harmony. The harp part is beautiful, and I'm jealous outright of it. The arrangement of this piece is solid, but the ending is undoubtedly as you stated. As well, the entire piece is fairly dissonant, so even though I can tell the mood is happiness, the sounds just kind of clash. Of course, that's just how I feel about dissonance at all, so feel free to ignore that last critique.
Author Comments
I've held back from submitting this song for a while now. The ending is atrocious, and I didn't really put as much effort as I should have into the body of the song. I really don't consider this to be my 'best' work (perhaps one of my worst), but it does have some redeeming qualities...or at least I think so. Why submit it then? Hopefully for some constructive criticism. :D
Let me know what you think.
Neon-Bard responds:
No, I completely agree with you about the ending and the piece as a whole. I definitely could have tried harder, that's for sure! I am glad that you found the song to be happy and at times beautiful, it means a lot to know that. Thank you very much for the review! :)
You are right about the ending. The piece sounds nice, but I bet if you had better plugins it would sound wonderful. Good work.
Neon-Bard responds:
Agreed! New plugins would be a godsend. Thanks for the review! :)
Nice man :) Sounds really good. I really enjoyed it, sounds really happy... like it could be in a commercial or something :D Nice work man
Neon-Bard responds:
Really? Perhaps I was a bit hard on myself with this one...but I really appreciate that you like it! :D
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