I love your melody, it sounds really awesome and reminds me of the song "The Moon" from the ducktales on NES. But you went in a totally different direction. I expected it to go in a very video gamey direction, your intro literally screams it out. I think that with that intro melody it could go into a REALLY happy sounding song. Something like waterflame does on newgrounds. But what you did here is interesting too. Definitely unique to a lot of things I hear. I think this song needs a more defined structure. It actually is really spooky almost, but the way it is structure just makes me curious because it flows together well and it gives off a sort of movie score feel to it. I can't describe it. It's really weird. But overall, the song is pretty good dude! Nice work!
Also, it'd be awesome if you could check out my original song "Boundless" and give feedback!
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your analysis is very helpful -
i personally enjoy a progressive feel, as the song takes you on a journey!