Not gonna lie, the title caught my attention. And I had no idea what to expect from a song involving dancing, day dreams, and the idea of the song being in industrial. Although the song is repetitive, I think you can get away with it, because the song really fits a movie score type song. Maybe a horror film, where a person is walking through an abandoned warehouse, looking for the killer of his wife. I don't know, something like that. Or maybe he is trying to avoid a killer who has been stalking him. This is an interesting piece though. Nothing really to complain about. Nice work!
Also, it'd be awesome if you could check out my original song "Boundless" and give feedback!
4/5 star review