The piano sound is just so soft. The piano combined with the drums makes an awesome combination, the bells could be a little softer i think, but that doesn't really bother me too much, I just think it would fit in with the theme much better. Again, love the piano, the part a :45 is fantastic too. I just get this feeling when I listen to this song... Full of peace and wonder... it almost sounds like movie score, like the movie is ending and the hero talks about what he learned. I thought there could be a better transition going into the part at 1:28. And the staccato violins in the background at the point is a little uneasy sounding to me. I think if they were shorter, or maybe if they were a tuned percussion instrument, it could work a lot better. The song actually has nice structure, most of the transitions are pretty great and creates nice flow. The only times when you need to better the transitions is at 1:28 and 2:33... I think it's just the fact that you are dropping instruments and going down into softer part of the song. It's just something to work on is all. 3:17 is the best part of the song. When the new instrument whistling tuned percussion sounding synth instrument comes in... I don't know what it is, but it is really awesome. Just great job really. Great feel to the song.
Also, it'd be awesome if you could check out my original song "Boundless" and give feedback
4.5/ 5 stars
5/5 star review
Thankyou. That whistle part at 3:17 was already in the song but I made it louder for that part of the song. I agree the song needs better transitions.
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