this is pretty good. the piano is excellent.
there are a few thing that bothered my though. when the hihat first came in it felt kind of harsh, perhaps ease it in a little more. also, the harmonies created by the bass were, too often discordant with the higher parts of the song (not so much the piano as the other accompanying instruments.
Author Comments
You step into your live dream....It's plain white but you couldn't see what's in it.
[HEADPHONES PREFERED]
This is a first submission after the last one I've submitted. I think it's been over a year. I've been busy and unmotivated. But now here I am, trying my best to produce one again. It might not be my best yet, but I'm really putting effort into it. Please enjoy.
For track 10 of Draconity album, I couldn't really tell when it's coming yet, even though it's been over a year since I last announced it. Some accidents happened on that piece.
Xyirx
Xyirx responds:
Hey, thanks for the advices. I'll make sure to note on those points. :) Glad you enjoy the song.
Keep at it. :D
I like it!
Xyirx responds:
Hey, thank you very much. Please be acknowledged that I don't usually get reviews on my submissions but you make it does. You made my day. :)
Credits & Info
You might also enjoy…
Xyirx 
Licensing Terms
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
![Overclocked Chip [NGADM + NGUAC 2024]](https://aicon.ngfiles.com/1356/1356017_medium.webp?f1725439497)
