Aww yeh. I really like the section at 4:00. NOT JUST BECAUSE IT'S MY MELODY but because I think you rendered it really well. The instrument choice is A++. Your solo at the end is good too but the instrument is weaker! You always hide your melodies :P
There are a few minor things but I think that will always be the case. Too bad about the glitching. ;_; Next time you start, I finish ;-)