Good Beat. Poor Execution.

I see what you're trying to do, but like Veranoph said the vocals are off-beat.
On fruity loops, there's a way to change the tempo to match the beat you're trying to make.
Do some research into that, and keep making music :)

Keep it up!

I thought that the vocal bits sounded a little bit 'out of sync' with the rest of the music. I really liked the voice of the rapping, but it almost seemed off beat to me. I enjoyed the beat, something just didn't quite match up.