hey man, youve got some interesting sounds in here. im not sure what you were going for though, it doesnt seem to have any real structure to it to be a dance song. it almost seems like you were going for some sort of glitch-house/complextro style.
So Im not sure if you were just messing around or you had a goal, but that takes away from my rating. but the sounds are definetly something I havent heard much of, I like that. I give a 3.5 here and a 3 on the sub.