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Author Comments

I was kinda lazy with this song. Definetely not something im proud of i just kinda threw it all together with stuff ive done before.

I'm contemplating deleting it.


Too much theme-riding

There's a little bit too much dependence on one phrase and one instrument-set. It doesn't come across so well.

The key for higher marks here is to up the number of sound types, how and when they appear, and especially -- use automation.

You can totally get away with dependence on one theme -- so long as the same theme never SOUNDS the same twice.

If you can morph, filter, and change-up the tune continually (which is a LOT of work!) there's no reason this can't have double the marks I gave it!

good stuff

yeah i love the drumms catchy. That sqeak effect was prety kool but i think you kind of over did it with that effect though. you should have changed it up from time to time. but then again its your shit. i'm interested in what you use to make your beats. i think it would be fun to work with ya

Red-Slash responds:

i use fl studio to make all my songs.

thx for the review man!
If ya wanna work with me on a song send me an email or something


Ouch, this song got zero'd to hell and back. What you need in here is some really fast breakbeats. Push the tempo up to about 170bpm.

At the moment its a little more ambient than it is drum and bass. Those pads are sexy :D

I'll 5 this to help the zero situation ;-)

Red-Slash responds:

thx man i always have trouble putting my music into a genre cause my shits always all over the place

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Credits & Info


4.32 / 5.00

May 18, 2006
1:26 AM EDT
File Info
3.9 MB
3 min 24 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.