here's the latest version of my song called undead radiation. i added some sounds to parts that sounded to empty and deleted some things that made some parts sound too chaotic. i also added a somewhat heavier kick to the last part. does it sound better than the last version? please give feedback, thanks! ^^
wow nice
So this has a very "SCI-FI" feel to it and brings on some nice sound here its a good amount of time it has this dark and deep sci-fi feel very nice indeed, while this is an older piece you have some great ideas and hope you keep making great stuff like this one and hope to see more.
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No changes needed.
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Pretty good! I liked the beat at the beginning and the transitions a lot, but honestly I was expecting a little more of the melody. It was pretty climactic, which is good, but it felt a little too...simple at times. Still, I like the instruments you used and the beat and I think you have potential, so keep it up! :)
i made a new version, hope you like it even more ^^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
gunmaster4ever 
