No lie, but this was closer than i thought it might be.. Docter came in and gave War-Spawn some medicine, but it wasnt enough to stave off the sickness WS delivered. Props to both! 5d!
DR. - 0, WS - 9
Good lines from both sides. There was a bit of stumbling on lines from both competitors, but good nonetheless.
Cerebro, you need to work on your delivery some. You can write, but that's not enough most of the time. I have to give it to War Spawn.
DR. - 0, WS - 8
Doc The Surly Bro: Great personal shots and humorous. Alot of the punches were constructed well, I think that a few shots would've been received better if delivered with a more comedic approach. A few rhymes were a bit simple "happy/crappy". "Yoga Flame" was great.
Warts on the Paw: From beginning to end he had the energy on lock. Flips were on point. A few syllables sounded rushed, but for the most part, flow was tight. The flip on the sound bite, genius.
Warspawn took this one, but I'm very impressed with Doc Cerebro's efforts and solid material. Not sure if this was his first battle, either way I look forward to more battles from Cerebro.
Warspawn fo' the win.
DR. - 0, WS - 7
You're still in HDC? :P
Somebody shoulda told me about this. I would have loved to go against War Spawn.
DR. - 0, WS - 6
We'll keep that in mind..
I try not to review battles because I don't think I'm knowledgeable enough to know what I'm even talking about. But, if my opinion counts for anything, here it is. I'll keep it short.
DC, your delivery did need a little work. The flow was there, and you still had some nice lines, made me smile/laugh a bit. Just work on that delivery, give it some UMPH, and you'd be good, I think. You definitely had lines that relate to your opponent, so that was good.
WS sounded good in this battle. Maybe because it was his own beat his had to rap over, I dunno, but he sounded good. Good flow, good lines.
My vote goes to WS.
The "Yoga Flame" sample was good, DC, I liked it... and the "You Lose" sample was good, too. All in all, I was entertained.
DR. - 0, WS - 5
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