Witty, and consistent clarity/character/and flow.
Also, an enjoyable voice. I never care for voices much, unless I do. And then....I care!
Great job on this. Written to make for an excellent flash, too! Enjoyable too, was the inclusion of sound effects (flashback, ambience in crime alley, etc)
Thanks! I went back and relistened and got inspired to start on the third episode, and I just posted it!
Thanks for the feedback!
Fantastic!:D Looking into animating this.
Oo, really? I'd love to see it animated. xD PM me with your ideas?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.