I'm not really sure how to describe what this song makes me feel..Sadness mixed with hope? Although judging by the story in the author's comments, I'm thinking you were going more for despair. Very beautiful and captivating piece, regardless. You're an awesome composer, sir.
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The many faces of 3 - 6: Tearsunk.
And it was silent, calmness came over me as the days did fly by.
I had sunk into the void, close to forgotten who i was, where i was from.. a cocoon for my thoughts.
Dissapearing in a vibrant present, but not truly there, in my stead the wraith took the blows, the pain, and it seeped out the memory's of a life past.
A broken world arcing over us all, face did we burning rain. I suspected his anger grew.. but eventually would leave me,..savior, demon.
The rain reached the void, thrown into the open once more.
Alas, naked without him.. torn from your burned heart.
Now we merely whisper and glare.
Calamaistr responds:
thank you man, it was a feeling of complete hopelessness, beyond despair. The 'already given up' kind, and then to be 'taken over for the ride, a life's past perhaps blissfully forgotten being someone else for a period of time, just to cope with a certain past.
check back i am currently uploading the two closing pieces :)
thanks again. -cal.
Very nice! It sounds very video gamey :D I like it a lot though. I think that the instruments could sound a little bit more realistic though. I think you could definitely improve this by adding some reverb and echo effects to the instruments. This will really help the drums as well. The song is very naturey and nice though. Good job!
Also, it'd be awesome if you could check out my original song "The Return" and give feedback!
4/5
Calamaistr responds:
I've already reverbed the instruments, but i prefer not to overdo it because there are alot of subtle effects. The instruments are as they are to stay in the same spirit as the rest of the album ;)
thanks for your review and kind words.
-cal.
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