I think you don't try in the right way... I mean, you tried to do a Dance song. But a musician is not supposed to make a special genre of music.. Genre were made because people wanted to classify music. An artist (in my opinion) should make music, and then, when it's done, put it in a genre. Not do the opposite, and make a song that trying to be a genre... It's my opinion, and when I listen to your song, I'm pretty sure you don't play YOUR song, but you're trying to do "a dance song"...
I'm not sure my sentence is understandable, so if it isn't, I'm sorry. I'm french, and I'm not fluent in english.
If I do it in your said method, I would be producing D&B forever. I need to try out some new stuff, you know.
Slow the tempo down to 156 then to 164 during each change up.
Hm, seems legit.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.