Uhh... No

2/10 for actually trying, but past that,
Bad quality
Annoying beat
Grating bass
and a Distinct lack of creativity

keep trying and you could be okay, but you're not there yet

uhhhhh..

probly sounds good but dude.. wehn rendering the song try rendering at 192 kbt or is it the bass messing up ur song?
i think it is.. nice song btw

Nice but hmmm

nice sound but the clarity of the track isnt that good what you use FLS? anyways the track is good but the clarity of the sound is not good but besides that is really good keep it up