More reverberation in the beginning for sure.
You could tie the high parts from 0:20-0:30ish.
I like 1:10.
1:21 could be more emotional.
I really like this piece. Might be the best I have heard so far on Newgrounds. Thanks for posting this song.
man I love it its so peace...
you certainly have a good vision for jaz.if possible would you see about adding more instruments to this song?it could be me,but i kinda feel like its misin out on a little more kick to the jazz for lack of saxaphones guitars or trumpets.other then that you have done an impressive job.im glad i found your track in the search engine.^.^
I'm glad you found it too, thanks for the review!
Thanks for introducing me to this wonderful song. After hearing this, it inspired me to look up the original and take myself on a 2 hour jazz journey which really benefitted my Sunday. Great work, good dynamics on the piece.
Horizon = Expanded
Job = Done
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.