Pretty good. I think it could use some improvements, such as the structure of the song. It really is just the same melody over and over with little variation. I think the song could really improve if you added some more instruments to go along with the main riff. Like a piano or guitar. Adding some acoustic instruments would be pretty sweet :D I think it would be fine to do the same thing over and over like you did here if you added some more instruments as it builds up to the next part of the song. But hey, you can always improve. It's pretty good though.
Also, it'd be awesome if you could check out my track "Stranded" and give some feedback! Thanks!
4/5 star rating
thank you i will some time :P