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Salvation (WIP)

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A more rock-y sort of sound, despite being all electronic. Still working on the style. Kind of hard to classify.

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Nice intro. Starts off very strong. The strong bass drum is really good for sure. I think there could have been a better transition from the intro to the part at 0:14. I know you put a drum fill there, but it wasn't powerful enough to cue the transition. One thing that could create a better transition is to add another instrument right before the next part, where that new instrument will appear in that next part of the song (If that made any sense DX) But adding that build up of instruments right before the part at 0:14 plus a strong drum fill could be great. But experiment with it!

I think this song needs more instruments. It is pretty good with the sound mix quality, but it isn't as full of a sound as I was hoping for. I think part of it is the bass is a little too quiet. Try boosting that up a bit! It will make it more full. Also adding more instruments will make it more full. The more intricate melodies you put in there, the more full it will sound. But don't put too many in! Or else it will just start to sound annoying DX.

Structurally, the song is pretty good. Like I said before, some transitions could use work. But you add a lot of variety. The main melodies in each part repeat a lot, but there is a lot of variety in the background where it is ok. But this is where you need more instruments. More instruments and more melodies in the song will take focus off of things that are too repetitive.

So overall, you are strong in some and not so strong in other areas. The places you could improve upon is adding more instruments in order to give your song a fuller sound, and to give it more color and atmosphere. Another thing to work on would transitions, where again, adding more instruments to the song would be helpful. But nice work!

Also, it'd be awesome if you could check out my track "Stranded" and give some feedback!

3.5/5
4/5 rating

NICE! Well done!

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Uploaded
Oct 4, 2012
4:41 AM EDT
Genre
Industrial
File Info
Song
4.8 MB
2 min 7 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.