Nice story raps.
I also like how you sound over these relaxed, mellow beats. You should stick with this style, a la Joey Badass. Really feeling the sounds.
you know what you do.. this going in mp3 - car album)) Keep banging))
This all sounds the same. Your not saying anything new.
You got to use better rhymes.......
yea the story is good, and your flow isnt bad.....
the lyrics need improvement.
Am I being trolled? I'm VERY good at taking criticism....but this comment makes no sense o_O.
Well um, this is well over a year old, listen to my new stuff at: