Definitely an improvement
You've made it better, thats for sure. I'm really enjoying the percussion in this one. The hats are very well mixed, congratz on that! You'll have to teach me. I like that arp a lot better now, much cleaner in the mix and lets the rest of the track have some room.
This is a good foundation for a track, now sometime in the future I want to hear a trance/dance track that is totally unique. Make your leads epic, this one is good, but lacking in variety and sounds a little bit dull. Watch that clap as well, a tiny bit on the loud side. Kick roll is a little bit too intense as well, drop it back a little IMO.
Like I said, this is a good track. You've got the basics covered, now lets see something special. Also, don't be like me when I first started to make dance. Spend lots of time on a couple of tracks, dont just aim at producing quickly. Quality music takes a lot of time and patience.
Good luck dude, you're on the right track. :)