Like a couple of my songs I've aimed for a lot of variation, and a build-up to a climax.
I'm more proud of the melody in this song than in any other song I've composed!
Take a listen, I think a lot of people would appreciate this.
Very smooth. Enjoyed the piano, it was just the right touch to complete the track. Also enjoyed the high sine-ish synth that pops up in the background every so often. I think there might be a bit of overload when the track gets noisier, the bass feels like it's pushing a ceiling. Other than that, great work, I thoroughly enjoyed!
Keep it up mate.
I definitely agree this track is crowded at times!
Regardless, thanks for the kind words!
what software etc. do you use. i feel like this would be really good if it was a bit grundgy. i like it alot but i don't feel you hit the genre on the head. either way keep it up its good listenin.
I use fruity loops (9, producer's), and sometimes I touch up with cubase (but I didn't for this song)!
I don't think the arrangement is the best possible, and I think that's possibly what throws it off it's genre? Anyways, thanks for the critique and the compliment! Maybe I'll give grundgy a shot. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
GershBeats 
