To The Skies

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My first attempt at a drum n bass sort of thing, or whatever it turned out to be.

Criticism and feedback are both welcome and encouraged, I can't improve much unless I know what I'm doing wrong! I'm already very aware of the repetition, it's a habit I need to break, so already working on that, but anything you think about this track, let me know.

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SkillSkillFiretruck

2012-09-30 10:28:37

It needs more to it. It needs different drum sounds in it like hits and just more punch into it overall. nice attempt

Obrum responds:

Thanks, I'll keep that in mind in future.

5Camo5

2012-09-30 10:28:25

Like you said, repetitive. Add some different chords, and maybe try changing the key somewhere in there for a few lines. I'm not much of a critic, but hey, here ya go :P

Obrum responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I'm aware I need to add more variation, I just can't seem to make the track flow well when I do. But hey, gotta keep practicing, I'll get there. ^^