I just noticed you use Ableton Live. That may be good if you are really skilled, but most times the results are pure crap.
Okay, but you have had quite good luck, not very with this one, though, you need at least some decent melodies!
The sound from this was great, but the melodies, no no, it`s really spoiling a lot of the track!
Good addition with that spacy synth, it saved the day.
So remember some better melodies, and possibly more intergration to the track.