I like this beat a whole lot man, props to TheFantasyClub.
You sound good over the beat man, I do agree with Vashelite, the flow could be a bit more steady.
I really like the feel of this track, though. You should stick to this style.
Haven't posted in awhile. But here I am.
Here's an old song but redone.
I just rapped everything else (producing/mixing/masteri ng) was done by TheFantasyClub
Major shout out to em' did a great job, Hope you guys like it
Original Track: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/479423
Song: Worlds Away
Artist: Emdee / The FantasyClub
Lyrics:
I woke up in a dream today/
the sunshine was gray/
the clouds one by one, they ran away/
and opened up the sky/
and then in my eyes/
shined a beam of light/
then my hope took flight/
its like my whole life I've been attacked/
by negative energy, i damn near collapsed/
within myself, like a neutron star/
I'm livin' life behind my painful scars/
that you see on my face/
yeah life left a trace/
that's okay, cause I still fuckin' love this place/
I'm goin' alone so don't even pack/
I don't know where so don't even ask/
but when I'm gone,
remember ill be thinking about the past/
thinking about the good times we had/
I noticed that there's no more so.../
Chorus
I'm settin' my sail let me float away/
cause I'm movin' on I got no reason to stay/
ill be moving on, just moving on, and on, worlds away/
I'm settin' my sail let me float away/
cause I'm movin' on I got no reason to stay/
ill be moving on, just floating on and on worlds away../
Verse 2
A peace like this I've never seen before/
I watch the waves crash as they hit the shore/
I feel the sand as soon as I depart my ship/
this place I don't really know what this is/
sometimes it feels so right like/
this night life,
makes you wanna turn in to the right type/
of person that forgets and forgives/
the one that holds on to hope and knows how to live/
if you're like that, then you're not like me/
Mr. Emdee Mr. WC/
Mr. Why did this have to happen?/
Mr. I don't know I'm just askin'/
Mr. Lost the love of his life/
Mr. Wants a second chance for a hug tonight/
Mr. Without you I can't adapt/
Mr. I gotta go don't follow, cause I'm not leavin' a track/
im just../
Chorus
I like this beat a whole lot man, props to TheFantasyClub.
You sound good over the beat man, I do agree with Vashelite, the flow could be a bit more steady.
I really like the feel of this track, though. You should stick to this style.
Well, here we are. Thanks for using my song to create a tune!
Thanks for creating a tune so I can use a song!
Honestly man, I think you could have done better, your flow is a little inconsistent. If you want a demonstration of what I mean, search on youtube for "Vashelite - Notice You" its on this same beat.
no doubt me to, but oh well next time hopefully
Pretty good! You should post links to the lyrics/background music. I gave it a 4/5. Keep it up :D
Thanks dude. I edited the Description so you can see the lyrics and the original beat. Thanks for listining!
Great!
Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.