I'll have to agree with the other reviewers on having a softer bass and having the drums sound a little better. I also find it a little too repetitive, but that's usually a curse of EDM lol. Other than those complaints, I like this, it's very catchy.

Excellent! I like the theme, alot. The lead melody is very catchy, the short arpeggios add the spice. I like the way you incorporated sections without the drums. They create breathing room and connect the themes and different instruments together. I really like the way you put it together. The whole track is solid, it flows nicely endt-to-end. For someone who says he's still learning. sht. I think you can teach! U my freind have got the talent. :D

I have to agree with Lazy Bucks, a softer bass would be very nice. The part at 3:55, sounds a little sloppy to me, some instruments sound a little too out of sync for my taste. The drums could sound a little better, but I don't think that is your fault.
Sending in a 4 rating for you to give it a little higher than it is now :D Nice work

Its cool, or at least the idea is cool.
Softer kicks would be nice to hear in the mix, but the melody is pretty catchy.

What programme do you use to make music?
Its a nice song, obviously could use improvement in the drum department, and maybe a better mix.
Perhaps go over the synths with a EQ filter just to remove the harsh high frequencies would be my only advice.
Deserves a high 3.5 rating, dunno why its rated 3.13, I'll bump her up ;)

Be sure to check out my latest track mate.
Cheers and Good Luck!

Sounds cool
I'd add some more soft kicks and drums to it, and make them strong at some parts
but hey who am I to judge, everyone got their own taste of music ^^