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Just some thing I made in a short amount of time

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For that one, your intro was not representative of your track, you could've added a little bit of work and finesse. Try to use different kicks or drums at different intensity, or just add some variations to it!

For everything else: it was a good job :P You took good use of the dissonance, it fits well with the mood, and it flows correctly! Theme is coherent too, and the timestamp is constant enough.

As I said, the intro lacks of finesse, but at all, good piece!!

BowserThedestructive responds:

Thanks, I was gonna add some variations, but they ruined the feel of the song. So I worked around the kick, and clap and then added variations of the main melody line. Glad I am improving though.