You used a sample beat , you could at least slice it.
sure why not if i knew what you were talking about id do it.
It has this rythm that reminds me a lot of DMC, and other games of that kind. I agree with the guy below, it has a lot of potential to become a Video Game background, even sounds somewhat like Zelda dungeons, pretty cool beat, and creates a great atmosphere.
VGM BG Material!
That is, 'Video Game Music, Background Material'!
Another track with hidden potential that just needs to be brought to the surface.
This can be downright epic without a lot of effort!
However as it is it stands on its own really quite well, and the murkiness of the audio might be considered to this tune's benefit: The medium pace, 'jogging' feel to the bass, and progression sets this up to be a "thinking" game background with medium pressure and a countdown timer, or a boss battle of some sort.
This sounds even better than I remember...
I really like the atmosphere this track provides. But yeah, now that I think about it, I agree with the last guy who reviewed. It needs another pad, hitting different chords than the main theme. And maybe a slower melody, on a higher octave, kicking in half way through. I think that would give it a nice air.
Pretty nice, but...
It was a kinda creepy tune, but it lacks something... Only something, like... Like some screams :)
Anyhow, if ya want, ya can check out my tracks :) (review if possible)