I can't find anything really missing (hence the full score) BUT I would like to mention few ideas since you obviously rock in this claustrophobic field. A one high note playing very quietly adds to that panicky feeling in these tracks. Also I was missing that sudden drumfill (PAdadaTSAH, you know) to add some drama.
Otherwise the song develops well, not too fast and not too slow so that the listener would get bored. You deserve a perfect score, keep it up! :)
Thank you. :) Indeed, there's a few things I could have added to make the track more menacing like the stuff you suggested. I will keep it in mind should I ever compose more music of this kind.
I like this song. when i listen to it, I can feel the tense, worry,and then the hope, and strong confidence.I think the best part is from 01:30 - 02:00, could fit in some game which needs more mystery.
Glad you like it. :)
Well done. These original themes are excellent.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.