This has a good, balanced mix that uses up the full spectrum. You have a good voice too, full and deep - I'm sure the ladies like it. ;)

As for mixing vocals, what you got right is that they sound "close" and "present", aka they cut through and sit on top of the rest which is ideal for this kind of music. I think you didn't need to accentuate the bass so much as at times it sounds muffled and eats away at the backing.

Also the S, F, etc sounds (sibilance) is pretty harsh, you need to use a deesser to fix that.

Don't be afraid to edit your performance or redo sections to get a more accurate version (I do hundreds of takes for each song I make, famously Michael Jackson would do thousands, never satisfied until it was the perfect take!), although you said the vocals in this are temporary, at this later stage I doubt that's the case. :P

To help the vocals sit in the mix better you should also consider reverbs/delays to even it out a bit. Reverb is great at blending sounds!

Anyway, that's the "constructive" stuff, I love the song anyway and look forward to what you do in the contest.
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This rocks! I love your voice! I'd like to hear some more exotic melodies with your voice, and certainly more of your upper octave.

I instantly recognized the AddictiveDrums! I abuse that drum machine a lot. The drums sound great, I might change the beat during the song some more, maybe a dreamier kit altogether. I hear some nice dynamics and ghosting going on, but the hard hits hit really hard and should probably be brought down to bring out your voice.

Otherwise, all the instruments sound great, and the composition is great c: I enjoyed it!

:D Well done! Your vocals were very nice ... You have a tasty voice I must say. Everything is mixed perfect! A lovely slice of heaven ^_^ Kind of reminds me of New Wave. Excellent work!

9.5/10

The vocals are perhaps just a little too strong, or the instrumentals are a little too weak. This is especially noticeable because the drum and percussion line is barely even audible. So I think it's the latter because your vocals sound great; they're crisp and clear and you've got a perfect voice for the style too. The instrumentals just need a little extra. To me, I'd especially like the ambient synths to have a bit more prominence, and of course the drums need that prominence too as I mentioned before. Other than that, this track is pretty cool. Nice guitaring and singing. The panning between the vocals and the guitar near the end is a surprise. Great work!