There's one part of this song that always forms the crux of my judgement. In your example, it's from 0:41-0:50.
Those 9 seconds just sound so off to me. Especially when compared to what led up to it. It should've been more ominous and foreboding.
All of that being said, it was still a good piece overall.
4 stars, 4/5.
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