I'm not sure why people are rated this so harshly; aside from sounding like a little unnatural, it's freakin' gorgeous. Adding a bit more in the lower area would definately boost the tracks fullness for sure though
Going through and listening to some of your other tracks, so pardon reviews on your old stuff :P
Thanks for the review!
I appreciate you thinkin' that. I never really tried making something more contemporary like this, so yeah, there's a lot I can improve here. To be honest, I made this on a complete whim. I just sort of went "I want to make something peaceful and beautiful, but not electronic. Something you can here in some kind of obscure RPG or something." And so, I attempted this.
And by all means, go ahead and do that! I always appreciate people who take time out to review my stuff. It really means a lot (:
This is OK, maybe it would help if it had some sort of background ambiance or deeper string chords because it sounds quite empty and a piece that's based on strings usually benefits from sounding fuller!
It's not a bad piece, it's just quite generic I suppose. An original element (some sort of FX or a defining melody) would help it maybe! Like if I wanted to hum this to someone I don't know how I would because it doesn't have a defining melody - see what I'm saying? I dunno, that's just my feeling! :)
I suppose the flute was supposed to be the defining melody, but you're right, it's not exactly fleshed out enough to really be the defining melody in the whole thing.
I didn't give this loop as much attention as other things I do, as it was a small little thing I wanted to put together as I haven't released anything in a while, as I stated above, but I'll definitely keep your criticism in mind should I come back and perhaps make this into a full thing!
Thanks again for your review, I really appreciate it (:
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.