not bad dude I like this one, I thought the bridge where you add the audio clips of different people was really clever almost like a sudden burst of memory coming back from a random reminder (if that makes any sense) are they clips of the people your singing about?
Yes. You see my friends and I used to make home movies together and that's where I got the audio. It's kinda a sad reminder of the "good ol' days". If you have time check out this musik video I made it features us in our younger years. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tBi0b2gA_Ho&feature=share&list=UUWgm_hdjgV_q3CqSPIIt72Q
Anyways, the playing was great! Very nice lyrics, although at times the soulful singing turns into heart-broken mumbles, and it gets hard to understand. As for the singing, it was passionate but at times totally out of pitch. If you're dedicated to music, I recommend some singing lessons. Your body is an instrument, and a teacher can help you fine tune it!
Overall; 3.5/5 Fairly good.
Thank you I really wanna get lessons but shyts expensive! They charge $20 for for like a half hour out here! As of now I'm practicing DVDs Melissa Cross the Zen of Screaming. I haven't really been much of a fan of this song either. That's why my band doesn't play it!