It's good, but it definitely feels short. I love that bit at the end where it starts back up, though.
If you don't mind, I'll be using this as a track in an RPG Maker game I'm making. I think it'll do nicely for a creepy sort of factory theme.
this is too short
HAHAHAHAAH THIS IS GREAT!
It sounds so GOOD!
You man, are a brilliant composer, like how it continues at 0:34
Wow I knew we had quality BGM to work with in the audio portal...
Nice use of the just about the entire orchestral toolset. The drumbeat is pretty basic cut time, but you'll discover better variations. Good job, son.
Thanks daddy. You are really good wit' de drums.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.