Your diction can get a little over the top sloppy but I like what you're going for. The instrumentation is very good.
This is the final version of my track "You're Just A Dick, I Say". It was previously uploaded here under the name "Rakakata", so if you want to hear any improvements or the instrumental track for this one, check it out!
Information about how I recorded everything and about the gear I use are also on that one.
I hope you like it!
(Comments are always appreciated, you know that)
Cheers!
Your diction can get a little over the top sloppy but I like what you're going for. The instrumentation is very good.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.