Pretty cool song man, reminds me a little of the music on MCR's 2nd album. I felt this song was very well structured and arranged. If I could the only changes I would make would be maybe a different tone for the guitar, I might have played it with a slightly brighter fuz tone with 2 rhythm guitars instead of one and the bass a little louder to add to the fullness of the over all sound. But that may be more of a personal preference. Over all I felt the track could benefit from a better EQ and a touch of reverb here or there particularly on your voice. Good song tho other than that. nice work.
Thanks! I'm a HUGE fan of MCR, for you to comapre us to them makes me feel more confident in the song. We were planning on re-recording it professionally hopefully sometime soon so It'll get better!