Good energy

Some good energy in these I think the space between each new line could be shoter, some good voice works here with lots of variants of voice work and you really seem to know how to make a nice demo, There is some good quality in this demo here with a good reel, so keep making more of these demo reels as they show off your voice work very well.

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I think the space between each new line could be shoter

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