This song is good, but there are a few flaws. The first thing is that the intro is too long. Hearing this drum pattern 16 times in a row was a little annoying. I think that maybe just 2 times or at maximum 4 times in arow would be enough. I think that the key to making good music is to try and keep it less repetitive as possible.
Of course if you have this great 16 bars pattern that has lots of instruments playing then i don't mind at all, even if you play it twice in a row. But if it this just a snare and a kick then it needs to be short.
The rest of the song is pretty good and well made. I really like the part in the middle where it really picks up and the beat is really nice.
Keep up the good work :)