I like this version better- it keeps with the harmonic content better, kind of has a cathedral feel. The other one comes off as plunky and annoying after a while. If you could take this and swell it to a certain point, you might be able to take off into part two from there.
I like this version more too. the other just sounded kind of cool with the arps and other instruments, but this is the original version. I was trying to go more for an ambient sound, and was working on this one off and on for the past couple weeks. Version 2 was made about an hour before it was uploaded. it's the same notes, just different intsruments. Thank you for the review.
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